Henry Hines

Author, Dungeon Master, Dork

My name is Henry Hines. I am an English teacher, an author, and a dungeon master.

Some days it is hard to say which one is the priority.

My first novel, The God of Make Believe, is described on this page and you can read the first four chapters below. It is fantasy murder mystery, like a combination of Ninth House and Miyazaki's Spirted Away.  

My book is available on Amazon!

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You can find my blog below, With Hines Sight. There you can find my totally unjustified opinions on any number of topics like writing, D&D, manga, teaching, baking, or whatever else catches my attention.


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Book One of The Unfinished Kingdoms. Available on Amazon Now!

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Finley stands above the freshly dug grave of his best friend and for the first time in his young life can find nothing to laugh about. High school was over and Huck was gone, his cause of death a mysterious accident.

Then the day gets worse. A shadow rises from the grave, a darkness washes over him, and when Finley wakes up he is no longer on Earth.

Finley is on Poa, a world that seems like it was designed by a kid, where ghosts can see inside your head and moving statues serve your every whim. But even this cheerful world has murders. Convinced that finding the killer behind a series of murders in the magical city of Oshroar will reveal the truth behind Huck’s death, Finley sets out to crack the case. His only partner is a sentient truth-detecting flower, which presents quite a problem for a boy like Finley, who hides his true feelings behind a veil of sarcasm and lies.

As Finley and his other trapped friends try to survive unending storms, giant statues, and sinister postal systems they discover that this world was created by none other than Huck himself. It is his childhood land of make believe and it is desperate for new heroes to complete its story. As Finley continues his investigation and his friends struggle to reunite, the hapless detective discovers the dark secret Huck hid at the heart of his world, the secret that might have killed him.

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Finley led them to the hole where Huck would now stay. The headstone would be ready in a week or so. The name “Hutchinson Kerrick” would decorate its face, along with a depressingly short span of years.

And even though the headstone was unready, and the flowers were already fading on the wet earth, none of this mattered to Finley. In his mind, you didn’t need monuments and performances to remember a friend. All you needed were memories.

The creature that lurked beside Huck in the coffin agreed with him.

As the sun set and the shadows lengthened in the graveyard, the creature settled in for a listen, making itself comfortable in the little box they had buried Huck in.

Finley faced the group, tears collecting in his eyes, even as he fought to keep his voice level.

“Should I go first?” All eyes were focused on the pile of dirt. “Okay. I met Huck when I was about seven years old. It was kindergarten, and we were both terrible at naptime, so the teacher would always put us in the corner, far away from the kids actually sleeping, and we would just play games. It started with rock paper scissors, and we played it so much we started to get bored with so few options. So, we made it rock-paper-scissors-tank- banana-blender-pencil sharpener, and on and on.

“Soon we lost all track of the game’s rules, but we never really stopped playing. We’d see each other in the halls and throw each other a new move like ‘bazooka’ or ‘fish attack’ and see what the other one would come up with. I think people started to think we were in some sort of weird cult, always flashing messages at each other.” He chuckled, but as the sound escaped him his eyes fell on the pile of dirt were his friend lay.

“We played it all through high school, and I thought we would carry it on to college too. And to the rest of our lives. Huck, why did you have to-” Finley choked, letting the words stay lodged in his throat. He looked up at his friends, but none would meet his eye. “Does anyone want to go next?”

Finley retreated and Yosef stepped forward.

And so it went, each of the young people sharing a memory they had of dear dead Huck. Some were funny, most were not, but it did not matter to the creature in the coffin.

The stories just made it hungry.

Huck never gave the thing a proper name, though he tried to give it everything else. But it was only in death that he finally gave the creature what it needed.

Now it was free at last, finally able to make its own choices, and ready to bring the curtains down on the story it had first crafted centuries ago.

All it needed to do was devour the tasty looking tear-soaked children above it.

It ripped its way out of Huck, bursting into the coffin they had buried him in. It clawed its way through the wood and dove into the earth, and no one heard it as it burrowed through the mud like a swarm of worms.
It waited there for a moment, inches from the surface. And to its surprise it discovered it was an empathetic creature, because the children above it seemed so lost.

But it knew just the solution.

It surged up to its wonderful meal, and they heard it at last as it erupted from the dirt, its talons flashing in the light of the moon.

But the boy in the box had one final card to play, and as the talons came down, he spoke those first and final words.

Once Upon a Time…

The five children vanished, inches from the claws of the killer. The monster roared in rage, scything at the air, desperate for the blood of the five who had come to bury their friend.

But they were gone.

Gone.

They were on Poa. And a new story had begun.

“You look a little too lively to be a corpse, you sure you’re in the right place?” were the first words that Finley heard.

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Finley stroked the flower’s gently snoring petal and it nuzzled further into his chest as if seeking warmth. “So do you have to feed this thing or something?” Finley asked the wardens closing in on him.

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Theo woke up where the sky ended and space began.

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The sun rose and fell on a floating castle and Theo argued with himself. Which was worse, falling from a great height, or fearing to fall from a great height? Theo worried he would never arrive on a definitive answer, as, in his mind, they both sucked.

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Things I Should Have Realized Sooner

  •  11/2/2022 02:35 PM

For the love of all that is Clerical learn from my mistakes!

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